MikaFreak123

I think is really good, I like the title and the repeating of I forgot the cold. But to me, it seems lacking in emotion. Like, you were writing with ...

Wow! I really liked this. There is no real mistakes here or flaws. I really like the deep emotion of this poem. It really speaks to me and lets me ...

Hi Teneall xD I'm here to review your story! So far, I love it. The description is great, I can actually get a feel of the way the character's dream ...

I really really like this. Not only because I can relate but because of the way it is written. I like the short lines, they sort of give a "edge" ...

I like this a lot. I like how short it is, it still goes well and the ending is fab :) It's comical and good. I just have a question, ...

I think song is interesting and different. It more or less tells a whole story. I'd love to hear it with music played. I think if you added why she ...

I think I know what you are talking about here. And I sincerely hope it's not about you. I like the repeating of "This is my love" But for some ...