MikeMoney

Well this isn't how I wanted it to turn out O.o

Hey, I enjoyed this...prolouge alot and it really got me eager to read more! As far as I saw, i've seen no mistakes as far as grammar and punctuation so ...

This is good, but after you put a comma you don't capitalize. But it doesn't matter, I have some friends who does that. Other then that I didn't find anything ...

This poem came from the heart huh? I loved this poem, I seen no errors or anything. I have no advice, this is just plain great, keep up the good ...

This was an enjoyable dark story, though it made me gag. I found no mistakes what so ever so good job!

It's very short, I really don't like short-storys or romantic storys but this was kind of intertaining. I couldn't find any errors as far as grammar and/or puncation. Good job!

Nice poem, it isn't really my type but your a good poem writer nice job and keep up the good work!

Wow, you did a great job! I'm sure your mom will love it, I can tell this came from the heart :).

Wow, you did a great job! I'm sure your mom will love it, I can tell this came from the heart :).

I agree with the two ^^; the story, errr prologue is written well, but you could add more detail with the characters maybe the house. Other then that nice job.