I don't like these anymore
dont look at these
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Young Butcher
Girl convinces her friend to eat raw hamburger off the ground.
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Silent Moment In A Theater
a guy walks around a theater and ruminates on his past
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The Haunted Theater (working title) Scene 1 Part 1
Part of the script for my short animated film! Considering the medium, I would prefer reviews based on story and dialogue rather than grammar
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Unnamed Ghost Book Chapter 1: Janet Goes To A Seance
first chapter of my book. tw death, mild swearing