Mirage

It's been a looooooooooong time since anyone replied to this... but I felt the need to look at such and accomplished poet's first bit of posted work. When Noxious says, ...

Well, well, well! Rhyming is not so childish after all! I loved the descriptions in this poem and I almost felt like I was there. Please tell me you wrote ...

After the first two lines set the mood as mysterious and mystical, I don't believe that "Get up and dance!" really fits the setting. It does jump around a bit, ...