Misty

Funnnnyyyyy sorry , that isn't helpful, but this was hilarious!

funnnnnnyyyy But I've seen pictures of obviously...well...hahaha

Well, it's very eloquent, but it's kind of cliche, I'd have to see it in the entire context of the story to really like it. 'cracked a wisecrack' need I ...

hmm. I like it? I mean it was okay, it wasn't outstanding *shrug*

I KNOW I commented on this. Oh well. I think I said that I liked the first bit a lot due to its poeticness and the element of unusuality (is ...

It was good until the last two lines; okay, good until the last line, which is cheesy. A nice, short read. :)

I like to be honest, so I will be honest. Completely honest. the first paragraph may be one of the worst I have ever, ever read. Scratch it entirely. You ...

I didn't like it. I'm not shy or innocent, I just found it revolting. There were elements to it that were good, like the smile one size too small, but ...

You know, you have the same problem I had when I was that age: not understanding proper paragraphing. But that's okay, it's easy to explain. All you do is (my ...

This is quite clever, again it's an easy read, but humorous and well put-together. Funny, too. the 'tripping over an expecially stupid rabbit' was rather humorous, and it does leave ...

I liked this; both was an easy, simple read, but quite enjoyable. Anything longer and it would have been too long, I think. A nifty little short story. Im sorry ...

Exordium Two lights on a dim reflection, dull eyes gazing halfway at the mirror, a man in the shadows, a question, still, savory, that hangs in the air overhead, just ...

It had a very strong ending, the creative use of big letters turning to nearly nothing was fantastic. I loved it.

some of the spacing resembles ee cummings. It would flow better if it didn't. Sentences spread out like this are a bit harder to read, the slow doesn't work. Still, ...

Thanks, I could possibly revise. But I have a tendency to repeat things, when I want to. I'm not fussed about grammatical inadequacy, I'm not fussed about my readers, because ...