Misty

Last thing: timjim: never never never never never never never never never tell someone that something they wrote isn't a story. It's not up to you. It's up to the ...

:P not sweating it. Brunettes are far more fabulous.

Lol, Crys, I almost feel apologetic for sending you all of that...I meant to break it up. Hmm. If I could only learn how to *edit* posts... THE COOKIE THING ...

I'm so sorry, ladydark, if you did lose a friend like this. That is absolutely horrible. Even for something so short, it was emotionally stirring. Honestly, it moved me. I've ...

Sorry one last thing: It's the little thing in this story that makes it excellent. The bit about the hairspray. The dot under her eye. Her breaking the mirror. Those ...

Haha. You are quite very welcome. :P This is much better. I especially like the added bits. It is excellent like that, now you are only missing one thing: Motive. ...

BTW, you said you are having trouble knowing where this story is going? let me direct you to some GREAT links: Okay I think that's what it is. :P hope ...

Hey; To start this off, I definately sympathize with you here. I have also had projects that take extended periods of time. But kudos to you for not giving up! ...

:) not trying to start (or finish) anything. Although I did feel like he made a few personal attacks. :P

I like, "I write sings, not tragedies" and the music video for it is freaking amazing! If I wasn't brokebrokebroke, and if my ipod hadn't gotten jacked I would definitely ...

I lied. No, not really, but I went and reread it after posting and it was uh...really really good. Lol, sorries. But the first stanza===EXCELLENT! lovely lovely. Sorry for my ...

I didn't like it, actually. I thought it was exceptionally cliched with a weak ending. The rhyming felt forced, and this is chock full of lengthy descriptions and I didn't ...

wow, brad, this is like the old poetry i used to love so much, you know the stuff I used to print off and frame and put on my walls ...

Jesus. This may be the best semi-rhyming poe,m I've ever read. The last two lines were moving...the length was perfect. The slight repitition suited this perfectly and I'm glad you ...

lovely. just that. never tamper with this, it's too excellent.