Misty

He's falling. Oh dear. I suppose this was a short story, then? Yes, it was very good. I enjoyed it. Thank you. for what? I don't know, I'm tired.

Good job! I like all of this, especially the begining, how the dragons started it, Haha that was great. You're a really talented writer. I like the fairy tale world ...

I see a lot in this, but I also think you need to follow the other's advice and REVISE REVISE REVISE!!! but you have a good story in the works, ...