Mizzle

Hey, there! Mizz is meh name. Don't wear it out. Just kidding. On to the review...now: This is such a cool assignment! I wish we did this in my math ...

Hey, Hailey! I really like the idea of this poem, its so true--I can relate, somewhat, I'm sure we all can! Why, its about a writer! However, I'm here to ...

Okay, so, hi there, Hippie. :D I'm Mizz, here to review! So, the rhyming scheme is definitely forced...and that's not good. I really don't feel emotion when I read this. ...

Hey, there. Sam, right? I'm Mizz. So, I liked this a lot. I actually sang it. I think "chant" is too...unmelodic for this. It seems like, with the right editing, ...

Eddie. XD. Always making everyone laugh. Lol. Like me. Right now. Except...Wendys totally owns BK, as well as McD's. But...they're all quite fattening. *wonders* Did I really just say that? ...

Okay, hey there, Kay. :D So, I liked this/most of it. I think you should listen to Classy when she says that the last part feels like something you would ...

Oh my gosh! This is to *die* for! I loved this. *cracks up with laughter* The ending, one word: awe-some. Bah, unlike Matt I started reading it thinking your were ...

Hey, Nick! Dude, I haven't seen you in so long, y'know! You should stop by chat, soon. Okay, so I liked this. It IS cliche--but cliche means relatable. Most people, ...

Oooh. I liked this. Nice work. Only thing...bones aren't read. :O They are white. XD But, nice job overall, I really think this has potential. I don't know how it's ...

Okay, hey there. Oooh! I know you! I've reviewed for you before. Hehe. Okay. Done with my outburst. So, I liked this a lot. I think Nate has some fantastic ...

Hello, MattJF. Nice to meet you. :D Okay, so, I liked this. But... It wasn't complete. The lines need to be tied together, right now they're like materials not yet ...

Hiya, Patatopie! Nice to meet you. :D So, I do like this, actually. You shouldn't capitalize words even if there is a comma before them in the middle of the ...

Hey, Sakura. :D Nice to meet you, by the way. So. I. Loved. This. Honestly, I did. The only problem was punctuation, which is very easy to fix. In some ...

Hi, Radid! Nice to meet you. Now on to the review. First off, I like this a lot. I actually like the use of dream, but that's just me. It's ...

Hey again, Moksha. :D I agree with Matt; your line breaks make this poem definitely hard to read. And, indeed, it seems like a thrown away shopping list full of ...