Mo.

Okay guys! I saw we needed a discussion thread, so go ahead and discuss! :D

**Good post loveless, you got my character's personality perfect. :D** *Rosmunda (Rose)/Immortal* Vana helped me up, and I could tell I was beginning to like this girl. "We're free!" called ...

I drew Kamas, 'cause she's cool like that. :D

**come on! someone post! :D**

*Rosmunda (Rose)/Immortal* I would've been able to hear the bomb if it were ten miles away, but I could tell by the shake of the ground, that it was inside ...

I'm Back! Y'know, you guys could have started without me, I wouldn't have minded. Give me a minute to type, k? oh, and my computer's lagging. :(

Okay. But I'll do it in an hour, 'cause I'm being kicked off the computer. :(

Hey Smiles! This is really nice! ooh, it's so sweet, and happy and sad. awww. I love the relationship between the younger brother and her, he seems so cool! Only ...

Done. :D Anyone else?

Hey there Ben, it's Mo, here to review. Just a heads up, I don't tend to review Non-fiction (as I don't tend to know what to say), and this will ...

Hi Ray! I really liked this poem. :D The only thing I found was a problem in it, was in this line: we are like 2 opposites where without one, ...

Wow. This is really awesome. I love the whole thing! I loved the way the poem developed, for me, it was really easy to understand (which I like, because most ...

Hey there Fatimah! Welcome to YWS! :D This is a good poem, but I agree with Jasmine, the last line's too repetitive, but change that, and this could be really ...

Okay, I'm pretty sure I know the plot well enough. Is it cool if I start? :D

Wow Durrie! You're awesome at drawing! This is really good! I love the shading! If you wanted to make this even better, you could fix the few stray lines around ...