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Hey there Ahmed! I'd like to say, that I liked this story. And you have a knack for detail. I really liked the detail you put into everything, but maybe ...

Wow, Durrie! This is totally awesome! Only thing I found a bit odd - The Dark Winged girls back leg looks a big wide, and starts a tad too high ...

Umm... can there be more than one immortal? (I'll make it different from the other one.) :D I'll post my profile a bit later.

This sounds cool! I'll be a guardian. I'll post my profile later. :D

Hey there! I really liked this! Especially the twist ending! At first, I didn't like it so much, because it just seemed like a re-write of Cinderella, but the ending ...

Hey Erin! Welcome to YWS! Historical Fiction? That's a very interesting topic indeed. And it's awesome that you like Drama, it's fun! PM me if you need help, or wanna ...

C'mon people! I don't bite! :D

Hey JSPike! Welcome *back* to YWS! It's awesome that you have decided to come back, and get back into writing. Good Luck in your competition! :elephant: ~Mo.

Thats so cool! Welcome to YWS! I'm Mo! Nice to meet you! :elephant:

Lol, this is awesome! :D But... it's not cold! :P ~Mo.

Hey Melvin, I'm Mo. I liked it, I thought it was nice, and you got across the message that was intended. The poem held my attention well, and I think ...

Ooh, pretty! Hey Smiles! I like this, especially the rhyming pattern, I think it has a good rhythm. Good job, I really liked it, I think it's very well written! ...

I think this piece needs a bit of work, but I like it. You have made love confusing, bad and good. Although, if I hadn't read the title, I would ...

Hey! I'm Mo, and I'll be reviewing this for you! :D I thought this was good, and I think the last line really brings a certain element to this piece. ...

Hey Kat! I didn't think it sucked! I thought it was actually quite good. :D Although it did confuse me a bit, I like the brokenness of it, and the ...