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Wow. I really liked this, I think it's really nice. It gives me a positive feeling, focusing on the good, and not the bad, learning from past mistakes. But it ...

Hey Forest! I really liked this, and I think it was well written. You made me curious, and very sympathetic towards the character. I think you really got the feeling ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! :D Wow. I really like this, it makes me think of anything. It makes me feel really creative and imaginate, and it has really brightened ...

This is really good, and it is very powerful to me. The indifference of life, a looming shadow, the message your poem portrays. I really like the ending, I think ...

Wow. This is really good. I think you portrayed the exact right emotions, and I really enjoyed reading this. I like the way at the end, you changed the way ...

I liked this. It made me think of a father, trying to protect his daughter from her fate that looms near. I think it shows that sort of love, the ...

Wow, this is really interesting. Just reading it made me scared, but curious at the same time, I wanted to find out more, but I had to run. You've packed ...

Hey, I'm Mo, and I'll be reviewing your poem! :D I know it's cheesy, you know it's cheesy, but I for one, like cheesy. :) I liked this poem, especially ...

Cool! It has a confusing feel about it, but it didn't really confuse me, if you know what I mean? (I think it's a good thing. :)) I really enjoyed ...

I like the imagery in this! And the old english talk. I also like the fact that you have given depth to her love for her prince charming. This reminds ...

Anastasia She ran down the stairs, to see her mother at the kitchen. "Bye darling!", she called from the sink. "Bye!", she called back as she ran down the stairs ...

Wow. I love the imagery in this! I really liked the way you wrote this. I also like the spirits and ghosts, I think they add a certain mystery to ...

Aww. It's really nice! I especially like the ending, it's a good way to end it, and it keeps in the mood and theme of the piece. The only thing ...

Hello Sae! Welcome to YWS! Here, have another cookie! *hands chocolate-chip cookie* Well, I hear you like elephnats? Me too! :D :elephant: Yes... elephnats is what I meant to write... ...

Heya Joy! Welcome to YWS! *hands cookie* So you're a fan of writing eh? Well, you'll fit right in here then. :D PM me if you would like to chat, ...