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Re: So I'm new here
Ello there, welcome to YWS! *hands cookie* A nerd eh? I believe I am one also. :P *high five* hehe. Again, welcome to YWS! PM me if you need help ...
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: The Queen is Here
Hey Queen! Welcome to YWS. *hugs* So you are a percussionist eh? That's so awesome! I play the flute! And that is totally awesome that you like music! :D Seems ...
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: The Official Goodbye/Departure Thread
xD hehe.
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Fake Everything
It's really nice, and straight to the presents the realistic view, that everything isn't a fairy tale ending. Not every ones life is full of sugar, spice and everything nice. ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Mom
Aww, this is so nice! I love how you have travelled through your life, and put not only the bad, that your mum had to help you with, but the ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Hello.
Hey Luciano! You're Spanish? Awesome! I'm Australian! hehe. G'day mate! :D Having fun? I know, it's hard not to be. :P Well, you are welcome to PM me if you ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: I was never greeted either! :(
I believe we have Demsi! Hello, again. :)
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: A Moment In Time
Wow. This is a really pretty, and interesting idea. It's really good. I really liked it. The theory is really interesting. It makes me want to read more. It's makes ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Our Love is like the Rain.
Beginning with a simple glance, The clouds begin to dance. And as our love grows stronger, A small shower starts to pour. We become taken over, our lives now one, ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Love Story
Woah, you're really talented! Only afew comments. 1) He's absolutely gorgeous, you've captured him really well. 2) The guy seems prettier than the girl. His lips seem a lot more ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Avatar.
Woah, these are really good! I just saw avatar the other day and absolutely loved it, so it made me smile when I saw these. I think they look much ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Raya
This really quite good. Although I am a little confused as why she would be smiling, while still covered in what seem to be fresh wounds. I really like the ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Fire Tears
This has a nice theme to it. It changes tenses and scences a bit, which confuses the reader, and there are afew gramatical errors. From what I can gather, it ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: An odd poem for a friend :]
This is pretty! Quite afew grammar errors that you should fix up though. I like the way you've described your feelings, but I think you could even do more of ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Listen to Your Guardian Angel~
This is really pretty! Good job! I felt as though you didn't need to repeat a lot of the words. A tiny bit of grammar that needs fixing. :D hehe. ...
Dec 26, 2009
