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Hey Amy, Can you please review my poem? It's Narrative Poetry. Storm Thanks. :D ~Mo.

Plastic

Hello, I thought I'd make a native :) If it's not right I can edit it to fit the plot. :D Name: Asavari Meaning: Spirit of the heavens Pronunciation: (AH ...

Hi! I'm Mo and I'll be reviewing your peice :D This guy, I fell in love, I cannot have. This sentence doesnt really make that much sense. Maybe; This guy ...

Hello. :D If you have the time I would really appreciate a review on my poem. It's Narrative Poetry. Thanks! ~Mo.

Okay, I think I have fixed everything, (if not most) of the things mentioned. The flow? It doesn't really have a poetic sort of feel (yet), so I shall be ...

Love the blue, so gentle. 8/10 xD

Love the blue, so gentle. 8/10 xD

Ghosts

This sounds like fun! :D Name: Topaz Jayde Raine Nickname: TJ Age(15-17): 15 Interests: Reading, Music - guitar and singing, Skateboarding, Fighting (knows a bit of karate, but mainly makes ...

I think I've fixed everything you guys have mentioned. Thanks for the reviews. :D ~Mo.

beautiful night

Who needs to communicate when you are this awesome??? *points to self* ~ Josh What would your character do if the person they trusted most tried to kill them?

Christine, Natasha, Drew, Cindy, Crystal, Kassandra, Rebbecca, Isabella, Lauren, Jordie, Jordalee. I like any of these :D 14 year old girl, lavender eyes, natural tanned skin, brown, sun-streaked hair

Well, I'm stuck, Authoress, I could use some help. ...I guess I still wouldn't give a damn would I? ~ Matt What would your character do if their parent/guardian died, ...