Mo.

Tell me what you think. (This is my first poem, hope you like it) :D. Wind whips at my hair through the open bus window, Creating a witch-like pose around ...

Cool. I really liked this - especially the twin bit (just thought I'd mention I'm a twin). I think you should make it a bit more obvious that Warren and ...

Chocolate, because there are many different kinds, and it's constantly becoming more and more yummy and un-healthy. And I'd get some variety that way! :D Why would I want oreos ...

Bella and Edward Love Vampires Night

Fiona, Emeline, Aisha, Holly, Hope, Jane, Rebekha, Jessie, Zoe, Kendra, Joel-(pronounced Jo-el)... Any of these I think would be good :). A 14-15 year old boy. He has bright blue ...

Hey, I'm Mo! :D Here's my review. Hi there, my name is Eric. I've been asked to share one of my adventures with you so I chose this one: I ...

I think I have fixed everything you mentioned. :D Thanks heaps for the review!!! ~Mo.

Thanks, will do. I agree with the history thing. And well yeah, it still needs a bit of work. Thanks heaps for the review. ~Mo. :D

Hey Jess, Here's my review. "Enough of this crap. If I didn't want to be in school, I wouldn't have came ," This should be come (otherwise it sounds like ...

Here you go, tell me what you be thinking :D I continue to stare at the flashing computer screen.Lucas logged out on me. How dumb am I to think he ...

Hey, I'd like you to *pretty please* review the first two chapters of my story. They are currently entitled Sam (#1 and #2) and they really need reviewing. Thanks heaps. ...

Hey, I'm am yet, another newbie. Member of 4? days :D. I get confused often in chat :D, and say random things. e.g. Stargate :D HELLO (woops, I used caps). ...

I love it! A few errors here and there, but it's late so I'm not going to nit-pick through it. If I remember I may tomorrow do a proper review. ...

Okay, I'm your twin so I'm going to be mean :D I'm sitting on the curb in the rain drinking a bottle of vodka. I like this opening line, it ...

Hi, I'm Mo and here's my review. My alarm clock wakes me up the next morning. I roll to my side and look at the time. Great, it's six-fifteen. I ...