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No it's not, actually! It's a Japanese dessert .-. And thank you ^_^

Jesus, that's a lot you got out of it o.o Thank you for the review! I like "as they orbit around me" a lot more...

I'm not fond of the fourth stanza either xD Poetry is not my strong point, I never know how to finish them and it ends.... badly mostly. But yes. Thank ...

I ran out of steam after the second stanza I guess you could tell xD I felt like I needed to end it because as a single stanza it felt ...

I have a bad habit of writing horribly pretentious narrators, sadly. I would like to make him be a bit more likeable, and though I know that'll probably happen more ...

I have a bad habit of writing horribly pretentious narrators, sadly. I would like to make him be a bit more likeable, and though I know that'll probably happen more ...

Oh, jeez, I forgot you can reply on reviews here ^^; But yes, the advice is much appreciated~

something happened lemme re-post this .-.

This poem's beautifully written, and I absolutely love the imagery. But I can't say I'm going to be much help in terms of reviewing it, I have no understanding of ...

OH OKAY. That makes sense ^^ But just keep writing, you can always edit it later!

I still don't see it as something to announce to someone, though. But okay.

I hated the books. I honestly couldn't stand Meyer's writing style.

I'm still trying to figure things out posting wise... Heheh. But um, this is basically like an introduction to the series I'm writing.