Moe_Moe17

This poem really touched me , it shows your true feelings that you have for your sister, but in the future try to remember to use spell check because i ...

very good and very self- explanitory as you said i knew exactly what you were talking about because of the way your poem was wrote!

Well first off i liked the way your poem flows... but there are a few things that i think should be rephrased or changed like (quote) "Boutiques, restaurants, and everything ...

YOU SAID ALL OF THIS WAS TRUE BUT IM YOUR SISTER AND I AINT EVER HEARD THIS STORY SO WHATS REALLY THE TRUTH?

it was really blah blah... i mean you repeated the same line over and over ... theres no structure whatso ever so its really not even considered a poem so ...

this was really good i really really liked it

this is nice i think you should start a story

aww... this was really sweet i think you should give it to your mom if you haven't already it would mean so much to her trust me i know

this made no sense wat so ever to me... it needs alot of reediting it looks like you just jotted something down and decided to post it

it was good but i agree with Alainna about making a short story out of it

this poem was good it really stood out to me

it was good... i liked it

it was good... it's nice

it was good but you need to consider using spell check

this was grrreatttt (lol) i liked it good work