Moe_Moe17

it was okay, kind of confusing but good

i liked it i can't wait to read more so keep writin please :lol:

this poem is good

its good in its own way but it needs a title

i lie this its the truth and then its also funny

i like it but you need to finish it you just stopped without completeing what you had to say

Dashari stands there looking at them for a minute and then says yall come the f*** on before the police comes yall standing around like aint nothing happened! Dashari looks ...

i liked this poem it was really good

hi max i really like this poem it really stood out to me keep up the good work!

cool i liked it nice job keep writing

im not trying to be mean or anything but this poem makes no sense to me you might want to consider reviewing it and make it more understandable

It was cute and i agree with Jennafina about the title fitting

thanks sis so wat do i do now

Name:Dashari Williams Age: 17 Race: mixed with white and black Gang: crip Well Dashari is a light skinned well formed girl, she's been in and out of foster care 3 ...

NICE JOB I LIKED IT ALOT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!