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Re: One Good that came from Crime
I LOVED IT IT RELATES TO HOW PEOPLE JUST OVER LOOK OTHERS IN NEED , HOW THEY ARE TOO WORRIED ABOUT THEIR OWN SELFISH WAYS TO HELP SOMEONE IN NEED ...
Feb 25, 2008 -
Re: Valentine?
I LIKED IT, IT REALLY CAUGHT MY ATTENTION EVEN THOUGH YOU COULD WORK ON YOUR PUNCTUATION.
Feb 25, 2008 -
Re: I Fear thee whom I loved
I LIKED IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Feb 25, 2008 -
Re: Colorado and high school
Name: Lokadisiara age: 17 history: abandoned She is caucasian has long blonde hair Pet: dog: name is dasari
Feb 8, 2008 -
Re: DO NOT RED
well where should i start well i can understand where your coming from but you should try not to switch from first and third person it can get confusing but ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: My Innocence
this poem was great keep writin down stuff about your life and it will soon grow
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: Love, I'm Sorry
this poem was really good... it has alot of good meaning in it and it shows how sincere you really are so good work...
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: I hate...
I hate you... I hate you for all the pain you caused I hate you because you never cared I hate you because you were never there when I needed ...
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
That was good straight to the point.... and actually thats how im feelin about someone right now so ur poem actually helped me out good job and thanxx :smt044
Jan 28, 2008 -
Re: Mixed up emotions....
As I look into his eyes All I see are Lies then I look again and I see all the love we use to have for one another... I want ...
Jan 28, 2008