Moo

Tinny, thanks for reviewing! I only just noticed this had gotten a reply there now, so sorry for the late response. I changed this part of the story quite a ...

Hey Audrey! I'd just like to start off by thanking you for such an in depth review. I appreciate that they take a long time to write, so I'm glad ...

This is very well written. I’m here to give you an in-depth review but I’m not sure I’ll be able to find too much to help you on. I’ll warn ...

No problem Maddy! I enjoyed reading it. I'm really glad I helped. If you need any further help I'd be happy to assist. ;) -Moo

Place holder for a review. Will return shortly. ;)

Jai, thank you so much for your wonderful comments. They've really warmed me, I feel totally touched. ^^ No one has ever gave me such lovely compliments, and I really ...

Double post, sorry. :(

Kiara :D Thanks so much for the help, I'll be sure to go and fix those things up. One thing though; ...flinging the doors open dramatically with a tiney ring ...

Hi Cleeo, Thank you for your comment. :) I don't get what you mean by this though: I don't really know if the number of synonyms followed sonnet outlines The ...

Double post, somehow o.e Sorry, all.

Thank you guys, that was very helpful :D I already have a plot twist in mind, so you'll see that in later chapters ;) I didn't want to reveal too ...

Thanks so much, I saw some mistakes there :shock: I cant believe I didn't notice the one when her brother throws the toy car :oops: I'll quickly go and fix ...