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  • Poetry » General, General Re: F-bombing

    Interesting...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Blurred lenses

    T hank you!

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Humor Re: The Sneeze

    You're welcome. :)

    Dec 28, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My truth.

    Okay, I hope he comes back to you. Good luck!

    Dec 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: Health Is Wealth

    Anytime.

    Dec 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Clockwork

    thank you for the review and you don't sound negative at all! You actually sound quite helpful! About the time traveling bit: you didn't miss it, I just haven't put ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Fanfiction Re: Birds (by Sméagol)

    How humorous! I've never read or seen any of the Lord of the Rings series, but I've heard about Gollum. I like the way you make him speak. This is ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Clockwork

    Thank you for this review! You make a lot of valid points, especially that part about the characters. I think I will add more about them since you and @Bugslake ...

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: just an echo

    :D

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Clockwork

    Hello! Thanks for the review. Just some clarification: the one wearing the overcoat is a woman. The narrator of the story is a man. I haven't really said much about ...

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Curious Mind of a Teenager.

    You had me at "awkward".

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Montague's Last

    This is a very good story!

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Would you like to know how you died?

    No problem!

    Nov 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Would you like to know how you died?

    I forgot to mention that at first the baby is told be named Jake but at the end the guy wants it to be called Jack? Is that a typo?

    Nov 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Last Ones Standing

    Adorable. Its the teenage dream.

    Nov 25, 2013


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien