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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: It's My Fault

    I relate to this on so many levels! I do think it was a bit "blocky" BUT I think that it worked really well. The ending was especially good and ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Don't Let them Know

    I like this a lot. That being said, I do think you could make it even better! :) I personally would try expanding on the room. Maybe it means something ...

    Feb 4, 2016


To have more, you have to become more. Don't wish it was easier - wish you were better. For things to change, you have to change, and for things to get better, you have to get better.
— Jim Rohn