MoonIris

Hi Nanashi, I'm here with a review. You have a very interesting story and I'm glad I get to review it. I liked the idea of these creatures that are ...

Hi quitecontrary, I'm here with a quick review. I love your poem. I don't have much to say but I hope it helps ;) First of all, I think the ...

Hi ForeverYoung299, I'm here with a review. I'm not sure if this is advice, an opinion, or an actual review. Consider this a cocktail of review. :) Let's start with ...

Hi Buranko, I'm MoonIris and I'm here with a review. Let me start by saying that I am Romanian and I grew up with these stories so reading this is ...

Hi Buranko, MoonIris here with a review. I really loved your poem. As silented1 said, the personification of the wind is really well written and interesting. Furthermore, I think you ...

Hi, kinandre, I'm here with a review. I really liked your poem. I think it's simple but it's also very interesting. I like the fact that the verses are short. ...

Hi Rida, I’m here with a review. This is a lovely poem and it shows a different version of Snow White who isn’t a scared damsel in distress. She is ...

Hi Valkyria, I'm here with a review. This is a very interesting topic. I enjoyed reading about it. You give great information and it's clear you did your research. There ...

Hi HarryHardy, I'm here with a review. I believe this is a lovely chapter. We get information about the politics of this world. What I also liked was that we ...

Hi sorrynotsorry, I'm here with a review. I really enjoyed reading this. I personally already read Romeo and Juliet from Sheckspear. I never thought that it was something very complicated ...

Hi Rosewood, I'm here with a review. You have a lovely story but there are a phew things I would like to point out. Let's start with grammar. " the ...

Hi galaxygem, I'm here with a review. I loved your poem because it shows how all lives matter. It made me smile to know that people care about this. It's ...

Hi Lezuli, I'm here with a review. First of all, I would like to tell you how fun was to read and review this! If I have time I will ...

Hi annonymous, I’m here with a review. This is a lovely poem that you wrote. I like that you use vocabulary that is around the fire. I think it's great ...

Hi silverquill12, I'm here with a review. You have a fun short poem. I love how you gave examples and had the same number of lines in each stanza but ...