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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Stowaway and the General [2/3]

    Hi Magebird, This is the first fanfiction that I read on YWS and I really like it. I'm a huge fan of Avatar TLA and that's probably why I chose ...

    Jun 28, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Blame

    Hi Gravitem. I think you wrote a really nice poem. I especially liked that it's so short. I don't know if this proverb is used in English but it's known ...

    Jun 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: A Chicken Story

    Hi Awru, I really liked your story. It made me think of a book Animal Farm by George Orwell. It has similarities. Only in yours is just about chickens not ...

    Jun 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: The Wise Man of Haikus

    Hey. This poem that you wrote is very interesting. I am a fan of Haikus. I have to admit when I read the title I thought there are going to ...

    Jun 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Entry 3 - Heather

    Hey! I think it's a really nice poem. I like how her description it's not very clear and probably that's also your memory of her. At the beginning, I thought ...

    Jun 25, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Horror Re: log 1 - lany evergale.

    Hi calmyindanger, First of all, I wanted to say that I like your story. I think it's interesting how it's written, in the first person. I have to agree with ...

    Jun 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: Messy depths of murky words

    Hi watchamacallita, I really liked your poem.I thought it expresses the fillings of a writer in a beutifull way. Your poem had a nice flow and it made me think ...

    Jun 23, 2020
  • Art » Horror, Other Re: an unfinished ~social anxiety art~ I did that I kinda hate

    Hi! I think it’s a lovely painting. I do have anxiety problems and for a long time I tried to ignore them. I always thought it was something wrong with ...

    Jun 23, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: new moon

    Hi, StarlitMind. I am here with a short review. First of all, I wanted to say how creative the shape of the poem is. I was pleasantly surprised to discover ...

    Jun 22, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: 1

    Hi AJW708, I hope you are doing great! The poem that you wrote is very nice. I like how the first two lines are also the last ones. It shows ...

    Jun 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Pain As An Afterthought

    Hi there! I hope you're doing great! I have to admit that you wrote a really nice poem. I think you describe a pain, a change that we are never ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Shadow Thoughts

    Hi! First of all, I think that you wrote a really beautiful poem. I think you more or less wrote what depression is in a poetical way. I liked that ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: .

    Hi! I hope you're doing great. The poem is rather short so my review would be the same. I think you chose a beautiful topic and you wrote about it ...

    May 24, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Science Fiction Re: ...

    Hi! The first thing is that I loved your story. It's really well written and your description is amazing. It really made me feel part of the story. The only ...

    May 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Science, Culture Re: matricide

    Hi! I think you chose an important and interesting topic for the poem. It's really important that we take action against global warming. This is why I decided to review ...

    May 24, 2020


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