Morrigan

Hello, retro! I really like what you're saying. I also have experienced this. I do not know if I am an introvert, but I do have social anxiety, and I ...

Hi there! I'm here to review! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. So this is really interesting. I like what you do with the ships metaphor, ...

Hi there! Interesting stuff you've got here! I feel like we don't see many story poems like this anymore. I appreciate that you've chosen to write your story in a ...

Hello, wriskypump! I haven't read the other chapters, but I was able to figure out what's going on. There are some things I'd like to suggest for improvement. Sometimes, the ...

Hello, Alchemist! I'm here to rescue your chapter from the green room! I haven't read the other chapters, but I was able to figure out what's going on in general, ...

Hello, Cirute! Though I haven't read any other chapters in this novel, I decided to rescue this one from the green room. I'm quite glad I read it-- it was ...

Hello! I don't really know if I like this piece or not, but I do have some comments about the writing. I think that the language waxes a bit melodramatic. ...

As requested, I've come with my portable torture chamber. 1) I have no idea what this poem is actually about. Obviously there is a theme with coldness and winter, which ...

I am here to praise this poem. While I did not enjoy it at all, it certainly achieves its goal. Its goal being a very bad poem littered with chatspeak ...

Hello, Grieves! Unlike my fellow reviewers, I am able to find room for improvement here. The shorter the poem, the harder it is to pull off. Every word counts. What ...

GOSH DANG I really liked this. You built the tension really well, and I had to put on my nitpick hat to find anything. I did find some things, but ...

Hi there! I'm here to save your work from the green room! One nitpick first, before I forget it. "Sceptical" is spelled "skeptical." Now that I've got that out of ...

Hello, GeoCha! I'm here to rescue your work from the Green room! Obviously I haven't been with this story from the beginning, so I won't pick on the plot, as ...

Hi there! I really liked this. You gave the reader concrete images to hold onto while the abstract ran around on top. You conveyed your feelings well-- wistfulness permeates every ...

Hello, NatD! Since you did me the favor of reviewing two of my poems, I decided to drop by and review one of yours! Queerelves already addressed the punctuation issues, ...