Morrigan

Hi there, Hannah. You always blow me away with your imagery. This poem is no exception. It's lovely. There are only a few things that I would consider changing if ...

Hi there, Gee. That last stanza is so beautiful that I had to say something about it at the beginning of the review. My, oh, my. This poem is about ...

Hi there, Courtney. Welcome to YWS! This is an interesting concept. I think, however, it should be converted into a more poetic form if you're going to say it's a ...

Hi there, Aley. I love the idea. It's got a lot of ways to play with it. I especially love the description in the second stanza, and the last two ...

Hi there, Sparkle. I enjoyed reading this. It was a nice little poem about writing. Your rhyme scheme wasn't annoying (and that's something, coming from me (rhyme schemes usually enrage ...

Hi there. Welcome to YWS! I like your ideas here, and I'm glad I decided to read this poem. When I saw the title, I was a little leery; it's ...

Hi there. Ah, love. The gut-wrenching, heart-pounding, sleepless feeling that consumes all in its path. First things first. You have potential here. It is very basic, and very cliche, but ...

Hi there. Okay, the imagery here is fabulous. I love it. It's very focused. You keep one image (the machine boy) fairly constant throughout the whole poem. I feel like ...

Hi there. That first line is lovely. It's such a beautiful image. I love the idea of your poem, but I wish that the whole poem kept with the beauty ...

Hi there. I strongly suggest changing the title of the poem. No matter what, when I hear (and when many others hear) "What Is Love?" They immediately think of the ...

Hi there, Bard. As I promised, I've come to review your lovely poem. I love your images throughout the poem. They make it feel very personal. That being said, I ...

Hi there. I like your ideas. I especially love your last line. Ripping the sky from her wings. Love that. What a great, impossible image (I love impossible images). That ...

Hi there. Whenever I read your poetry, I find that I really enjoy it. I love your images, though I think there could be improvements made here. The biggest issue ...

Hi there. I really enjoy this, especially your imagery. It's fevered and crazy, just the way you portray yourself going through "poetry withdrawal." There are a few things I would ...

Hi there. (You should probably put a trigger warning in the description along with your rating.) (you've used the wrong "your" in the fourth line) Now that that's out of ...