Morrigan

Thank you for the clarification. I hadn't really noticed that it was more about other people-- perhaps it is a sign about my life. :) Thank you again, Rosey!

Thank you for your thoughts, Rosey~ I actually did this as an assignment for school. It was called a "place paper," something that focuses on a place as a driving ...

Thank you; this is exactly what I was looking for!

To be honest, it was the barking that threw me off. And trotting is more of a dog thing to me. So *shrugs*

DANG GOOD JOB That's amazing! I'm so glad that I decided to critique this

Comment on this so I remember to review it later, please! :)

Thanks, Messenger! I guess the tone I was going for was... whimsical? But also to get a point across. Thanks for reviewing!

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You're my face, cleverclogs.

Ahhhhh thank you so much :3

Hello. How do you think that changing the punctuation and capitalization to conventional standards would affect the tone and visual aspects of the poem? I assume you did not read ...

A loblolly is a type of pine. I guess I assumed people knew what that was. Thanks for your thoughts.

Why should I make it longer? I have nothing else to say.

Comment on this in like 5 hours so i remember to come back and review this c:

Hi! Could you point out my spelling mistake? I'm having trouble finding it. Thanks for your review!