Morrigan

Hey there, like I said, I didn't mean to sound rude in my reply. I shouldn't have responded when I was tired and had just gotten off of work because ...

After looking at my reply, I can see how it might sound rough, but I didn't mean it that way! I was just trying to explain what the dashes were ...

I will not capitalize god because I do not believe in it. Dashes are used to symbolize an interruption. I suppose I'll replace it with an em dash, as it'll ...

You're wonderful. I was going to say the same thing.

This is the full poem. It's a love poem.

lol i guess that i just won't give you any more help then.

in that case, I would phrase it as "trapping" eyes because if the eyes are trapped, that means that they're in jail. Or set with a trap. But it would ...

Actually, the grammatically correct way would be "I loved the dove, yet chose the vulture." You only put a comma before conjunctions, not after them.

Woulda been heartbroken if you hadn't namedropped me.

Thanks!

Hey, I don't care if you're qualified or not. Your feedback is helpful to me. If you happen to be able to put your finger on the things I can ...

While it does make sense after you explain, the point is not coming across in the poem. I suggest you rewrite it a little to change the tone, or to ...

Where was the cliche? You didn't mention it in the line by line critique.

Thank you so much for leaving this wonderful review on my work. I appreciate that you enjoyed it. It means a lot. Thank you!

I do have some questions. What language did it feel like I was trying too hard with? Also, what do you mean by "overly stressed"? This would help me improve ...