Mr.Knightley

Hey, JD! Here to review. Hmm...I really like the idea you have behind this. I think it's well written and well thought-out. Good job in those aspects. :D However, I ...

Hi, tennisprincess! I'm here to review like you asked me to. First off, I really enjoyed this. You have a very definitive way of writing that I enjoy. It's smooth ...

Hi ScarletteFire! I'm here to review. For the most part I really enjoyed this. I like the sort of half-rhyme that you use throughout this. I'm not sure if the ...

Hi, Valentine! Here to review, as requested. Sorry it's taken me so long to get around to this... it was my birthday the other day, and it was crazy . ...

Hi Skins! I'm here to review like you asked me to. Let's get started! First off, I agree with Dreamy that you need to work on your comma usage. I ...

Hey there, TenYo! You've got a great poem here, I have to say. It's great to see something with a positive message around here. It gets old when all I ...

What can I say about this? I don't want to go into detail about what you should or shouldn't do with this, because it seems so real , and true ...

Nutteh! I can has another poemz? Yay! Two in one day! :D Okay, I definitely love this one more than the other. Here, your rhyming is extremely neat and not ...

I really enjoyed reading this, sir! It's very true and completely honest. It's clear that you've put some real thought into this, and I applaud you for that! :D And ...

Hey there, Rock! I'm here to review as requested! I have to say, even with all those things that you fixed, there was still an unbelievable amount of typos and ...

Nutteh-love! You wrote a poem! :D I simply must review! Dry blood oozes slowly, Approaching like lazy death, First two lines are good! Like the devil's wicked grin Spreading 'cross ...

Hi there, Wariofart! Sorry it's taken me so long to get around to this...I've been busy. But! Here I am. :P First off, I would pay some serious attention to ...

Hi, Vamp! I'm here to review as requested! Okay...I'm not really sure where to start with this. First off, there were a whole lot of spelling errors and grammatical mistakes ...

Hey Ben! I'm here to review as requested. Let's get started! :D Okay, so first off, I think this article has some great potential. The idea behind it is something ...

Hey there, Bubblegum! I'm here to review like you asked! Okay...for a prologue, I think this needs some work. The whole idea behind the prologue is to hook the reader ...