Mr.Knightley

Hey Conrad! I actually kind of like this. I agree with Kammie that your idea is pretty bland and overused, but you've managed to bring some imagery-for-the-soul to the table ...

Hi there! I do think this poem is nice, but it needs something extra. As Aqua said, your rhyming isn't the worst, but it could definitely use some improvement. For ...

Hey Conrad! I have to say, this is really good. I can't find much to critique in this, which surprises me. The dialogue is completely realistic and believable, and your ...

Hey Lisa! I'm here to review as requested. I'm going to have to agree with Coco on this one; your story could use some work. I don't think it's super-horrible ...

Hey Typist! I have to say, this was really good. Throughout the whole thing, I was dying to find out what the issue was between Phoenix and Jett; I think ...

Hi there Lady! I definitely agree that you need to proofread; Lowercase "I's" are completely unnecessary and definitely distract the reader. As for the actual idea behind this poem, I'm ...

Hi King! I'm here to review. So...your poem. I'm not really feeling it. Well, I'm definitely feeling something , but it's not admiration or respect for this; it's irritation. Mild ...

Rock, why did you delete this? I was kind of excited to read it, and I'll assume it was for the contest? If you got bad reviews, that's still no ...

Hi! I'm here to review. :D If I'm being honest, this poem needs some work. It's very rant-y and drawn-out at parts, and I get no sense of flow as ...

Hey Dante. I'm going to be your reviewer. Before I even start on this, you need to know that this entry is probably way too long. Any one of these ...

Hey Typist! I'm here to review your awesome story! Yes, it is indeed awesome. In a sad, disappointing kind of way, but it's awesome nonetheless. I love it when stories ...

Hey Lil_Pau! I have to say, this is pretty cool. :D Your use of vivid, contrasting images makes for a rather epic lyrical poem. I can definitely tell that this ...

For the second time today, I'm left feeling a little confused. Is the narrator pro-celibacy or anti-celibacy? It's all sort of jumbled together and somewhat ranty. Also, I don't feel ...

*judged* I really loved this! I'll admit that this is definitely a contender for first place! You've brought a whole different dimension to the meaning of the song, and for ...

This was kind of strange for me. At first, I like it, because the flow was smooth and your rhyming scheme didn't seem so forced. After the first stanza, however, ...