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Re: Afraid
First let me say there is a lot of truth that goes into this, not many people get or understand the emotional stress people go through when loving someone else ...
Aug 10, 2015 -
Re: As Messed Up As It Gets - Chapter One
Hey Lylas i've gotta admit this is a pretty sad intro but I guess it goes along with the title. I will say that for me; the story kinda jumps ...
Aug 1, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 2 (Ever-changing Title)
Hey Timmy me again and so far like I've said in my previous reviews that this story seems really interesting. First I gotta say that i'm having a little trouble ...
Aug 1, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 1.2 (Ever-changing Title)
Now this is getting interesting more than it already was First off: Adding the changes definitely helps with the story Secondly: This story is very interesting especially with HQ great ...
Jul 31, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 1.1 (Ever-changing Title)
Hey Timmy I just read the second part of this little series you got going on here and I just have to say you are an excellent writer and I ...
Jul 31, 2015 -
Re: His Dog
Im a little teary eyed after reading this. Very emotional and heartfelt, I found myself somewhat connected to the main character even though it was a short story. I like ...
Jul 31, 2015 -
Re: Trigger: Intro
WOW! this could be a great opening to a bigger story. I like it a lot but feel like it needs a tad bit more detail. It sounds very traumatizing ...
Jul 31, 2015 -
Re: not for the reasons you think
This poem was very emotional and I can tell it meant a lot to you. Seeing emotions brought out like this really shows the best in writers. I like the ...
Jul 31, 2015