Ms.DreamingOfTheMissed

I didn't find the topic to be so cliche. Actually I quite enjoyed this. It seemed to realate to anyone and everyone out there. I would have made the point ...

I didn't quite understand what the setting for this was. I understood some sort of war but in what time? was it in modern day or mideival time? In set ...

wow that was impressive I can't even really find anything to pick on you about. I could ask what exactly you're wondering about in the poem?? line 3 needed a ...

I liked this actually. It seemed different from the usual. It seems to need a bit more of a point to it though. Explain why theyre on the ship, where ...

it could have been thought out better. I agree with DeeDee that this had almost nothing to do with twilight but whatever. in set 3 lines 3 and 4 dont ...

Wow impressive there were a few minor mistaes nothing major I couldnt make out the visualization. I understood everything but had to sort of create the caracters myself. Try adding ...

It seemed to be missing emotion. All of it seemed for like fact fact fact instead of opinion included. Try to add a little more feeling into it. The poem ...