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MsJane

  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Feelings

    Hey! Hope you are having a good day today I managed to read through the entire writing and I'm impressed with your choice of vocabulary at certain parts. You have ...

    Jan 22, 2018


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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