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Re: Chapter 2 -- Ends
I really like this story :) I love the plot in it and the mixed up rerlationship between the two charctaers. It was very interesting to read and drew me ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: Duty
I like the flow of the poem and the way you worded the stanzas. The only thing I'm concerned with is the style of the poem. Is is a free ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Lily
I thought it was a good read but i didn't quite understand the poem and what it was about. You did well in the first stanza, which had a good ...
Oct 3, 2011