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Re: You're Not Alone
Okay, first of all. I'm already singing this. It's very haunting for me, it feels as though a group of men are marching towards their death, all singing this haunting ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: The Fisherman
If I had enough skin, I would tattoo this to myself. Instead, I will settle for imprinting this into my mind. This piece has a very haunting feel to me. ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: A Soul Named Lily (0 - Before)
This is very interesting and brilliantly written. I loved your word choice, especially when describing the surroundings, it immediately brings images to the mind, rather than making the reader think ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: The End: Chapter One
This is a very interesting start. I was very interested in the story and where it was headed next. The only advice/suggestion I can give you is to back through ...
Jul 5, 2011