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I know that you already gave me some feedback on the prologue of my story, and I was really happy about that ^^ Could you look over the revised version ...

Hey, I'd appreciate it if you could give me some feedback on my story. Here's the link: Thank you lots! :D And I'll make sure to review something of yours, ...

Review my story, please? ;) I'd appreciate it if you could especially pay attention to sentence structure, as English is not my native language. Thank you so much ^^

Could you review my prologue? That'd be awesome :D Thanks in advance!

You can be as harsh as you want to - I appreciate any form of feedback ;) Thank you in advance :D

Could you review my story, too, please? Thank you a lot :D:D

Well, I have an account on FictionPress, too, although I have to admit I haven't been there for ages. My brother had this tool, kind of like that Stumble-thing, and ...

Hey :D Awesome that you posted something ;) Here's my review: Chapter 1: The Origin of the Rose I turned around, and Robert was right behind me. “Do you wish ...

I think it depends on the person how they react to alcohol. Some might have only had a little drink and be totally intoxicated and not functionable, others can down ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS :D:D Whoho, someone else from Europe :D Somehow, I don't see a whole lot of people from Europe, so it's great I'm not the only one ...

You will definitely improve here :D Just post some of your work, and you'll get lots of reviews showing you how to alter some stuff to make it better ;) ...

Hey Topaz :D Welcome to YWS - I hope you're enjoying it here ^^ I have to agree with the others; YWS is totally addicting, and I spend almost every ...

Hey, Sabir and welcome to YWS! Wow, that was very detailed - you seem very intereting :D So, is Sabir just your username or your real name, if I may ...

Thanks for your review, Sela :D I really appreciate that you took the time to review again! So, this is the second revision. I hope it's improving, or at least ...

Welcome Drea :D:D Wow, those genres are cool ^^ Well, okay, I prefer cute and "harmless" stories, but I do enjoy some good creepy and scary ones as well. Let ...