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Re: Should I keep writing this?
You should definetly keep writing this story! I like it alot, and Erin is a cool character! One thing that I noticed was, "She Finn, and I were all friends" ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: Twin Spirits - Introduction
I know this isn't going to help you much, but I just wanted to compliment you on your style! The writing flowed from one sentence to the next! I love ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: Fighting the cliché
This story is totally cute! I loved it :) There was one thing I thought, just for the flow, would help. When they are on their way to the cell, ...
Dec 24, 2010