User avatar

MysteryMe

MysteryMe

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Let Me Fall

    I just want to say, I think the format of your poem is really cool! The sliders make it like a puzzle to be solved, and it was really fun ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Frozen Fan-Fiction

    This is great, Messenger! Nice job, and a really touching conclusion. It's funny... I've actually written a frozen fanfic, too! I mean, mine's not on this website (it has a ...

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Realistic Re: The Blood of the Martyrs- Chapter 2: The Encounter

    Hey there, it's MysteryMe, here for a quick review!!! Thanks for the PM, btw. I'm glad to know that you value my opinion :). Hopefully I can help you out ...

    Jun 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Blood of the Martyrs Chapter 1

    Hey there, Jacquesfdutoit!!! It's MysteryMe, here for that review you requested!!! First off, let me just say: nice job. For a first chapter, I think this was the perfect length, ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: Azazel: Prologue

    Hey there! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review! Let me just say... wow. Honestly, this is a 'wow' kind of prologue. I knew you were a good writer, but ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Carnation: The Assassin's Tears - Chapter 1

    Hey there!!! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review! First of all, let me just say nice job! This is a really great, suspenseful mystery novel you have going on ...

    May 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Coming out.

    Hey there! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review!!!! I just want to say... wow. This is amazing. I can relate to this personally (on at least a small level) ...

    May 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Being a Boy is More Important than Breathing

    Hey there, queerelves! It's MysteryMe, here for a short review!! Ok, obviously I can't really say too much about this, considering it's only five lines (reviewing short poems is so ...

    Apr 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 1 - Breakfast at the Inn

    Hey there, Messenger! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review!!! I just want to say: nice job! This chapter was really quite interesting, and I enjoyed learning more about Castor's ...

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Life Counts

    Hi there! It's MysteryMe! Here for a quick (rather pathetic) review! I'm not much of a poem person, so I can't say much about improving this, but I just loved ...

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: Cameron

    Hey there! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review! Okay, so I don't really have much time for a review, so like I said I'm just going to make this ...

    Apr 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Castor's Tale - The Prologue

    Hi Messenger! MysteryMe again! I don't have much time to give another long review, so I'll make this really quick. I just really wanted to tell you that I love ...

    Apr 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Sign- Prologue

    Hey there Pompadour!!! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review!!! Wow, let me just start off by saying that. This honestly felt like a real, published novel I might find ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Castor's Tale - The Prologue

    Hey there, Messenger! It's MysteryMe, here for a quick review!!! Just want to say, this was a great prologue. You supplied a good deal of information (who the characters are, ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Blink.

    Hi there! MysteryMe, here for a quick review. I just want to say... wow. This is one of the most touching pieces on YWS that I have ever read, and ...

    Mar 29, 2014


You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World