Mystique

thank you so much!! :D

i really loved this!! i wish i could hear someone singing this, its beautiful. keep writing!

thank you so much!! this is the first time i based a poem on a story that i've have read, glad you liked it!! :D

oh same here!! you could try to narrate a true, famous historical event, give it a personal touch. i think you'll be able to handle it well!!

thank you so much!! glad u liked it. what do u usually have trouble with? do u prefer prose or poetry?

Thanks for pointing it out :P i have corrected some of it now but because there are so many ands i've let the sentences be long. thanks again!