Myth

I fear it'll burst from my chest I don't know what it is about this part. It seems out of place from the rest of the stanza that goes 6-6-6-8. ...

Can grab you while you’re in your bed Perhaps: Can grab you while you're in bed Of the eight tiny spiders you swallow in your Lifetime One of the reasons ...

You could always look in a map and take the names of different places. It doesn't have to sound fantasy-ish. The more realistic a place sounds, the better—at least for ...

I love the jazz one. The hair is the best but I can't tell wether the person is male or female. Maybe that's a good thing? I agree with Snoink, ...

Poem don't have to rhyme. I poured my heart out, To you. This has been done so often it means nothing to me. Try putting it differently, what have you ...

This is brilliant. No empty spaces! There is so much to look at, crazy really, and I can't seem to pick my favourite part. I guess I like the whole ...

I've done something like this at school. I wish I'd asked my teacher to keep hold of my folder. Did youi have to imagine the bits in between the photograph ...

It looks as if the door would lead into someone's house rather than a dinostore. How does it fit through? They look really simple, suitable for kids and i love ...

1 — You've done really well on this one. Her hair is fantastic. I don't have anything else to say expect she doesn't really have a chest, sorry to bring ...

Your sister is so cute =] 1 — This is my favourite. Why? It seems to have a magical hold on me than the other two and it also looks ...

He looks very squashed and flat. The shadow doesn't look right either. Have you tried looking at cats to get the position of the legs right? I like how you've ...

I write a few paragraphs each day and this usually takes fifteen or so minutes. On good days I get two hours of non-stop writing.

Since this isn't your own work I don't think you should be posting it.

Green = Comment Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * “Sorry, my parents are, um, going out tonight, and I can’t.” Even to Evan’s own ears the excuse sounded lame. ...

The people on here are the only ones I get opinions from because no one else in my life is interested in anything I write. So I love it here.