Myth

The hand holding the apple looks awkward and the hair merges with the tree trunk. Apart from that I like it, it is really nice.

Hey Meg! Welcome to YWS, I'm Myth. :D

No! Why should I? ~Monessa I haven't met anyone who I'd give it up to. Yet... ~Calais Are/were your parents/guradians strict?

I agree Snoink, quite strange. I didn't really feel anything, you can't really be 'happy' that someone has been put to death.

One word: disgusting. ~Monessa ... What is that? ~Calais What would you like to change about yourself?

I share mine with Christian Dior.

I swear it wasn't me so I'll cast it out. Unless it happens to be my pera . ~Monessa I'll hide it in case Mildew or Wilbur see it. ~Calais ...

I prefer to write by hand first, I get distracted on the computer and want it to perfect the first type it is typed up.

I like the poem. Tannar seems a little pleased with himself :wink:

That's quite tiny but I like it, I agree with the petals needing shading as you can't really make them out.

Hello! Welcome to the site. I'm a fan of horror though I don't write it much. If you want a critique let me know. :D

Hey Gry! You forgot the falcons! Dumas and Prachett rock :D I'm a little suprised you haven't included Tannar in your post :wink:

Oracle's Possession came when I was looking out the library window. It was very high up and I could see everything, the London Eye, Gherkin and I mean everything. And ...

I give the human government a disappointed 4/10. Why? I don't really need to explain but mages have far too many rules to follow and very severe punishment. And Calais, ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * He sat down at his desk and flicked on the computer and pulled out the quantity of notebooks that he ...