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Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Fifteen-year old, brunette Clara walked down the dead-empty sidewalk that bordered the dead-empty street connecting her small neighborhood

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * “You’re dying.” Liza announced, hoping that it didn’t sound too much like a renunciation and emitting one prudent look toward ...

You're quite like my sister. She loves video games--though writing isn't really her 'thing'--and she plays too much football. I'll be sure to check out Chris Wooding :D

Hello Kirsten! It is hard being a veggie, even at home. Some don't seem to understand that chicken and fish are animals. My writing is also very personal to me, ...

Very helpful, CL. Thank you! :D

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * “Your grandfather told us never to go down here .” ‘here’ = there She and Bryon descended the stairs, and after a moment ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Clouds raced on the sky at an impossible pace, their dark colors blending in with the yellows, oranges and purples ...

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * Cinderella ran, fled the house , the rags that had just been a party dress fluttering at every step. ‘house’ made me think ...

Three years ago. I've moved on. ~Aethel .: Are you good at masking your emotions?

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Hello Ralph! I love Crime and Punishment , you'll find quite a few fans on here. YWS is a great place, see you around.

4/10 XD I didn't even know most of them.

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