Nargles

This is unusual. Good but unusual. I don't quite understand who the 'Babe' is. Would you mind explaining it to me because if you did I could appreciate it a ...

That is so good, it sent a shiver down my spine. I really enjoyed it. You might want to think of adding commas in just to help the flow but ...

hey, this is really good but there are a few errors. 'this in an society' : it is suppose to be 'a society. 'however must follow a leader': you should ...

Hey Nargles here. This is really good and I am eager to find out what happens next. I spotted a few spelling errors: makes me shutter every time it crosses ...

thanks, my self confidence has just been boosted. I don't really give a damn about what other people think of me as I don't write for them, simply for myself. ...

I like the idea, turning your dreams into a story. You have some really interesting dreams! I really enjoyed it!

Okay guys i realise that some of who are getting a bit angry at MeIsAwesome and for good reason to as that person is obviously an idiot and an arse ...

Thanks, i wasn't able to copy it straight from word which is probably why there were a few typos, i will fix the mistakes up right away!

Thanks, i thought it might be a bit long will do :D

This is amazing. I love it so much. The meaning is so deep and the words go so well together. I love the title as well

This is a bit weird and I don't fully understand it but I do to some degree get the point you are making. Maybe if I was a bit smarter ...

this is nice, I really like it! Write more please!!

thanks, I will try to remember your advice. for the line 'after years of chasing, of hunting' etc I did that because I wanted to emphasise how things had changed ...

man, this is one depressing story, really god but depressing. I really enjoyed! it is a great short story and wonderfully written!!

This is amzing, i absolutely adored every bit of it! i loved the way that you used an admirer, it made me feel like i was writing to him! The ...