Nate

As I said in my review of Chapter 6, I like how you use short sentences to convey description. However, what I neglected to say is that a problem does ...

Wow, I've never read a Western before on YWS. It's a shame too because I happen to like Westerns. I have not read the previous chapters, but you have a ...

Way to go Hannah!

Also, Nate, could you explain the "Unique Visitors" statistic to me? I mean, did we really have 13,000 people online? Because that's pretty amazing- or is that somehow warped? I ...

July 2011 was a rough month for the Young Writers Society owing to the database failures that plagued the site for a bit more than a week. Even once these ...

Well, didn't get to 700 reviews, but that's okay. July 2011 still ended with 4,701 reviews total, which is more than any other month save two. It looks like the ...

Wow, the number of reviews jumped to 296 over the night! 700 total is very possible.

Slow start thus far with only 108 reviews in the first 4.5 hours. I was hoping for 200 at this point. I guess the Review Teams really do help a ...

Three down! My goal is 10 total.

Just a couple nit-picky things to address. “Sorry,” Josh said again , this time apologising for apologising . You don't need the part I crossed out as it's already implied ...

This is pretty good, but there's a couple things you can work on. First is some of the dialogue. This seems like a fantasy story, so reading this was very ...

This is actually pretty good. You have a natural writing style that flows well and it's a shame not more people have read this. What I like about this is ...

People need to be more careful about where they get images from. One of the gifs in the "Post your gif thread" came from Roulade Unlimited, which is the infected ...

So who's participating in the July 2011 Review Day, and what is your goal?

I think what you have here is a good beginning. You've obviously taken care with this, and it does show polish. However, there are some things to work on. For ...