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Nate

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  • Lounge, The Re: Review Day November 2010 Check-In

    9 reviews so far here! Going to do two more at least, and maybe a couple more past that. Join us in the chat as we count down the last ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Mistress WriMo

    Heh, I found this to be pretty humorous. I liked the different stanzas of what you could be doing, all of which sound endlessly more pleasant than being trapped by ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Hermit, the Fairy, and the Coon

    The title is awesome. Don't ever change the title. Like everyone else, I really enjoyed reading this. I liked the different points of view (especially the ones from the stuffed ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Is this Jealousy or Mockery?

    As Vast noted, you have a problem with apostrophes. Use an apostrophe in "it's" when what you're saying is "it is." However, you'd be correct in not using an apostrophe ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The dream Hunter and The Hood

    I like these. It's a lot different from the typical poetry in that you're describing an imaginary figure, and that's a refreshing change of pace. I agree with a lot ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Standing alone

    It's a good poem, but parts of it are awkward. For example "Full sunshine smile" feels very out of place in terms of meter. I think it would be better ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Bertalonies

    Heh, I liked this. It's quite unusual in that the main character dies at the end, which is somewhat of a refreshing change. I like how you took the typical ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Last Cowboy

    This somewhat reminds me of Louis L'Amour, a Western author. If you like Western themes and you haven't read L'Amour, I really suggest him. As Daydreamer stated, this has a ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Midnight Marauders (part 2)

    I'm not sure if the note at the top was meant to be humorous or not, but as a note, a lot of the "views" are really just Google, Yahoo, ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Naruto vs Sasuke: The Final Bout (Spoilers)

    Unfortunately, I've never watched Naruto so I was a bit lost. Regardless, I think you did a good job of introducing the action and of what was going on. You ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Review Day November 2010 Check-In

    Back from Baltimore. Gonna start getting 10 in now.

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: The Roast of YWS Featured Members

    Yeah, not going to happen. In case you hadn't noticed, this ain't Comedy Central. More than that, you are forcing people to be "roasted." This is not a good idea. ...

    Nov 27, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Review Day November 2010 Check-In

    Are you participating in Review Day November 2010? Let us know here! For myself, I'll be in Baltimore on Saturday (Review Day starts at 7pm Saturday for me), but will ...

    Nov 27, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Changes to Clubs (Minor Change to Profiles)

    Direct linking to discussions is now enabled for Clubs. In fact, it's enabled for every Club section (such as the Info or Members section). This should make it less frustrating ...

    Nov 27, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Reviewing Sunday on November 28th (GMT)

    This coming Sunday, November 28th, we will be having a Reviewing Sunday. Keep in mind that we go by GMT with these things, which means the actual Reviewing Sunday may ...

    Nov 23, 2010


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— Plato