Nate

You need to do some proofreading; for a piece this short, there should be almost no grammar mistakes. For instance, toddler is spelled as "toddle" and "upon his child in ...

Four down; six to go.

You really, really need to proofread this. I had a lot of trouble following the story, and had to read some sections three or four times just to understand what ...

I like this. A lot of emotion, action, and it moves along fast but not so fast that the reader is out of breath trying to keep up. However, what ...

In any case, the first four stanzas seem to wander around a lot. There's not a lot of flow, and the third stanza seems unnecessary. What it looks like you ...

You do a good job of starting this out. You moved straight from a scene to a detailed description of what your aunt means to you. However, there are two ...

May end up extending Review Day for an hour or two seeing as how the site crashed. As a sidenote, I'll write up a blog entry soon about why the ...

Well, we started off really well, but then fell tremendously behind. Guys, please do at least 1 review. It's not much.

Calligraphy ->> I'll do a big "Damage Review" post after all is said done, but the counting of your individual reviews is up to you. Ktg ->> That's great! If ...

Look at what two of the bots are up to: google.jpg msn.jpg They don't want to be left out of Review Day.

Are you participating in YWS' fourth Review Day this weekend? If so, let us know here! Also, why not set a goal for yourself? Personally, I'm aiming for 10 reviews.

The goal is probably only going to be set at 500 this time around, if not lower. Thing is, there just weren't as many literary works posted this month! Plus, ...

Just a quick note that I know there's more than a few people who are unhappy with the current Clubs set-up. Just keep in mind that everything on YWS changes ...

Kinda sad that my reviews don't count as reviews (or whatever has happened). ] Kinda sad? Seemingly, it's obviously a bug. I'll look into it.

But I'm wondering why "Discover Works" is in bold text? Read / Write was originally bolded as a compromise. Some members didn't like it coming sixth in the list of ...