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You have a good, clear writing style and I didn't notice any grammatical errors so it's clear you have taken time in developing this piece. However, the story is also ...

Well, in the space of minutes, the weather outside went from sunny to tornado warning. So, I have no power or phones right now (I'm on my android phone right ...

Heh, there's a lot that's wrong with this story ZYLF! But that's okay; it's the same with all of us. Firstly though, please watch your grammar even in normal posts! ...

Heh, I found this piece amusing. It doesn't really look like you're looking for an in-depth review, but you do need to proofread your work more. There were a lot ...

Hey there tamtam, When writing a poem or lyrics, you don't need to rhyme the lines. Getting rhyming right is extremely tricky, and something that not even the best poets ...

Crikey Jack. I don't know how you do it. I don't know how any of you do it; I feel like crashing after just 4 reviews! We've got 200 reviews ...

I have to agree with Firestarter. If this person really causes you to feel this way, then why resort to time-worn cliches and trite phrases? You need to speak as ...

Good experiment, but not quite right. As smaur pointed out, part of the problem is the text in between the stars. The problem is that they're mostly adjectives with no ...

Aye, I was confused too. Is this a replacement chapter, or a continuation from the previous? In any case, on the formatting not staying, it's because the post box on ...

Wow! There was a surge in reviews in the past hour! So compared to the last Review Day, we're behind by only about five reviews now.

I haven't read the previous three chapters, so feel free to discard my review in its entirety. A few hours later they passed through Omaha and into Council Bluffs, Iowa. ...

Yikes, we're way behind! I'm going to bump up mine from 10 to at least 12.

Four hours in and just 446 left to go! That's actually one less than at this point on the last Review Day even though our goal this time is 38 ...

So far, so good. At this point on June's Review Day, there were 42 reviews. So far on this Review Day, there has been 77 reviews.

Well, I'm screwed. It's 1:00am now so I don't have the energy to do any decent reviews and I'm going out tomorrow for my dad's birthday... Therefore, I doubt I'm ...