Nate

Sounds good!

Ten year olds walking around like that? That's more than a bit odd. In any case, you posted this in Non-fiction so I'll critique it. This is an article, so ...

Interesting plot ending; very Twilight Zone esque. However, at the moment, the story needs a lot of polishing. As Kyllorac pointed out, there are a lot grammar mistakes. And as ...

I think Evi and Lauren caught most of the story-telling and grammar snafus, so I'm going to concentrate mostly on the sci-fi aspect of it. The Setting The year for ...

Four for me, lol Just another quick note: There have been more reviews in the past 24 hours than ever before in YWS history. At the moment, there have been ...

Haha, interesting concept indeed, although it reminds me of a true story some years back. There was a young boy (about 8 or 9) who was diagnosed with cancer, but ...

This was generally well-written; it definitely seems like you've proofread it at least once or twice. Just a couple odd things I wanted to point out. Something drew her toward ...

I haven't read the rest, so I'll be concentrating mostly on the grammar. However, this is really, really short. If each part is this short, then why don't you just ...

Vox, how much do you care about this story? From reading it, I get the impression you don't care very much about it; there's a lot of spelling errors that ...

Just a quick note, we're currently right on track to hit 500 reviews. Also, I promise to do 12 reviews before Review Day is up. I would like a fifth ...

kamas.jpg It's the 'Kamas' block now!

Let us know here how many reviews you've done for Review Day! Even just two can go a long way in helping out. Also, since Art / Photography doesn't need ...

@ Nate: I don't know where it belongs, but I just knew that it wasn't Action/Adventure Fiction. :P Why not? Review Day is going to be an epic, action-packed day, ...

Knightley: I don't get it. Are you saying it belongs in Non-fiction?

Relax Skins (and Vernon). It's a joke. In any case, this is reassuring: The president would need congressional approval to extend a national cyber-emergency beyond 120 days under an amendment ...