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Follow directions. If you are interested in running any of these groups, just let me know. However, to ensure it doesn't go inactive again, you must find at least seven ...

In the course of YWS' five years, we've had over 200 groups created. Of these, though, only 68 survive (of which only 56 are viewable by all). Of the remaining, ...

Thanks for pointing that out Rosey! It's been changed.

It took nine hours, but the groups area is now completely revamped. The only aspect that is still not working are Group Applications. For the time being, if you wish ...

As usual Snoink, brilliant. Simply brilliant.

Why did you start two topics on this? Locked.

How could anyone think designer babies could ever turn out right? Most people spend their teenage years rebelling against what their parents want. How about spending your entire life rebelling ...

A lot of people using Internet Explorer don't know they're using Internet Explorer, or even what a browser is. How someone can use something every day and yet not know ...

It's a shame this doesn't have more comments. I thought it was well-written and interesting to read. I haven't read the other chapters, but this chapter could easily stand as ...

It's an interesting story and I hope you continue it. However, you need to proofread before submitting your work. For example: We surest an all out assault on the Vorog ...

Firstly, please rate your work. You didn't assign this work a rating, and it needed a rating of (at the very least) 16+. I gave it an 18+ rating due ...

Happiness ran from me like a young woman from a stranger in a dark alley. Woah, interesting simile, but I'm not sure I like it. In the paragraph, you talk ...

I haven't read the other chapters, but it sounds like the rebel leader gave up way too quickly. In doing so, he sounds more of a weakling than anything else. ...

Hey there JediRex! I haven't read the other chapters, but the story is interesting and I hope you continue it. There are two things you need to work on. The ...

Way too many ellipses. Those are the '...' you repeat over and over. If you are going to use an ellipsis, then use it sparingly and rarely. Otherwise, it just ...