Nate

hahahaha I greatly enjoyed this Castles. It reminds me a lot of a story I wrote many years ago on the same subject. I don't have any real criticisms as ...

Heh, did you know that I'm distantly related to the author (Taylor Caldwell) of the book you took a picture of? I love your photography, Morgan. It's a shame you ...

Great poem CS. I hope everything works out and best of luck.

Kyte/Stori, you don't know how refreshing it is to read this poem. Unless the poet is really good, I like poems that don't pretend to be about anything more than ...

Hey coolcat and welcome to YWS! I noticed you have no reviews to your name, so I highly suggest reviewing some other works. The more you review, the more you'll ...

Haha, I like the ending. You hint at it with the title, and in the second and third stanzas, but I didn't fully get it until the end. That fourth ...

lol, you're right; it is cheesy. But that doesn't mean it's bad. I, for one, liked it. This is a poem that requires two readings; the first time around, I ...

When you post your work on YWS, what are you hoping to see in a review? Are you looking for general comments about how the reader related to your work, ...

Hey all, I just ran the numbers for story/poem to review ratios, and it's not good. Fiction is doing pretty well (6.3 comment per work posted), but poetry is doing ...

Nate, I'm worried by the fact you ever thought Vanilla Ice was remotely cool ... That's because you're British. We Americans have refined tastes such as McDonalds and Dentistry.

First off, your grammar is good. I also like your style of writing; it flows pretty well. A few things: "She’ll begin with the yelling, the horrible screaming that makes ...

Your rhyme scheme is very odd. You go AABBCC then DEFFGHG, which is a bit like driving in a straight line then all of a sudden zig-zagging for no apparent ...

Putting a comma at the end of every line isn't all that necessary. Some do, some don't, and I don't think it much matters. Commas are used to show a ...

It's always good to be able to read three poems at once from an author because it gives you a good feel for the author's style, and you've got a ...

From your blog entry, it sounds like you don't do poetry very often, if at all. I'm not a poet either, lol. The major problem with the poem is the ...