Nate

crikey... how did Jiggity even find this? I even remember making this; it was right after the first YWS outage. I forget exactly what happened, but it took half a ...

For more early nineties love (and to understand Jiggity's earlier comment), see this . And yes. This is what counted as cool when I was in second grade.

Just as a quick note, the holiday icons will remain up until December 31.

I'm doing terribly... 20 reviews since this thread was made. In my defense, the past ten days were busier than I expected. But, I'm still going to stick to my ...

Sock ->> I am admin, overseer of all this domain. The proper question to ask is, "What do I not know?" I actually have multiple statistical sources that I use ...

There appears to be no content on the third and fourth pages, and the fifth page appears completely blank. While this may be a literary device you have employed to ...

This seems more like a personal essay or a blog entry more than anything else, so it's hard to comment on anything other than to give my own reaction. Fortunately, ...

Why did you quote your own work? If you were bumping, just be patient. It can take some time to get a review, and December 25 is the slowest day ...

Color you tenebrous indeed. A great poem is built in layers. You have the surface layer that is understandable to the casual reader, then you have subsequent layers that only ...

Eden is 11? I know you said you don't want to change the dialogue, but you're going to have to; Eden simply speaks too well for an 11 year old. ...

Capitalize those I's. If it was intentional, capitalize them. If it was unintentional, capitalize them. Always, always capitalize the letter 'I' when left by itself. These are interesting poems; the ...

Since this is a rather long piece, I'd suggest heavy reviewing; that is, you should go out and review a lot of works by other people. Not everyone will return ...

This belongs in poetry, so it's in the right place. Still, it is one of those pieces that doesn't quite comfortably fit in poetry, but definitely doesn't fit as a ...

Hammertime.

My apologies :)